I'm thinking about you like a heart thinks of its own beat
I'm thinking about you like calanders think of the year
I'm thinking about you like nachos think of cheese
I'm thinking about you like zombies think of nothing
I'm thinking about you like cars think about gas
I'm thinking about you like bad jokes think of Chuck Norris
I'm thinking about you like fish think of water
I'm thinking about you like good thinks of evil
I'm thinking about you like sweet thinks of sour
I'm thinking about you...
simple, but its good.
ReplyDeleteI like how its just simple and straight up. Well done.
ReplyDeleteI'm thinking about you like zombies think of nothing
ReplyDeleteLOVE ZOMBIES!!!!!! so this line really caught my attention! so you are really good and i think that you could possibly add more becasue i am sure you are a good writer! so just make it longer!
Short and sweet! :)
ReplyDeleteThis is great, but I'm sure you could come up with more.
ReplyDeleteI liked this alot, I think you could come up with more too because the ones you chose were original. also putting it in a more interesting format. this format would work if the annalogies you chose were more simple but yours were more in depth! great ending p.s.
ReplyDeletei really like the line.. good thinks about evil.. it's not something you'd normally put. it's very unique
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